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    <title>Part 27: Wrapping Up</title>
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    <id>tag:www.spd.org,2008:/the-process//13.594</id>

    <published>2008-09-25T00:22:14Z</published>
    <updated>2008-09-25T00:28:36Z</updated>

    <summary>OK, now we are entering the truly insane and hard-to-chronicle stage. We&apos;ve got the layout done and you&apos;ve seen how we look at color proofs for the photos and design. You&apos;ve seen the story editor&apos;s and researcher&apos;s comments on the...</summary>
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        <name>Scott Dadich</name>
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        <![CDATA[OK, now we are entering the truly insane and hard-to-chronicle stage. We've got the layout done and you've seen how we look at color proofs for the photos and design. You've seen the story editor's and researcher's comments on the proof, both of which were forwarded to the copy desk to input. Bob also sent a couple of changes along as well. The copy desk input all of those changes and produced the <b>final proof</b>, which is -- as the name suggests -- our last chance to weigh in with any changes. Story editor John Birdsall, managing editor Jake Young, and Jason all took one last look at this version and made their final adjustments, and then ran those tweaks past one another before collecting and inputting them. Mostly this was done over the phone on Saturday, but this exchange will give you a sense of the overall tone. ]]>
        <![CDATA[<blockquote><b>On 9/19/08 10:17 PM, "Cohn, Bob" &lt;Bob_Cohn@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b><br />
Just read the proof. Bravo -- it's very nice. I made a few comments, which I'll leave for Brian on his chair.<br /><br />
Two things of substance. First, I'm open to rewriting the hed. But I
still haven't heard what it should be. Of all the ideas, I'd lean most
to going back to Charlie Kaufman, the director's cut...and then just
living with the large-type echo. But maybe great(er) minds can do
better on Saturday. <br /><br />
On the proof, I suggested subbing out "But a decoder ring? Dream On."
with "Go ahead -- have a little gray matter with your Raisinets." Scott
said he could handle that, but he also then forwarded me this line that
Jason sent earlier in the day:<br /><br />
Hollywood's brainiest screenwriter pleases crowds by refusing to be
crowd-pleasing. His directorial debut is his trickiest film to date.
This time, has he gotten too smart for his own good?<br /><br />
Is there an amalgam, a la:<br /><br />
<i>"Hollywood's brainiest screenwriter pleases crowds by refusing to be&nbsp;
crowd-pleasing. His directorial debut comes packed with the usual
existential despair, absurdist humor, and intellectual mischief. Go
ahead -- have a little gray matter with your Raisinets."</i><br /><br />
What hed that goes with, pls think about.<br /><br />
And number two: I think the concept of the sidebars is working fine.
But I find the first two to be somewhat repetitive, and the third
somewhat uninteresting. I realize these don't have to be
earth-shattering -- they're process! -- but do we have something (email
exchange or something) we could sub in for 1 or 2? I think it picks up
more at 4 and 5. This isn't an<br />
essential change, but I'd like us to look at it.<br /></blockquote>







<b><br /></b><blockquote><b>On 9/20/08 7:08 AM, "Tanz, Jason" &lt;Jason_Tanz@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b><br />Hey all. Ok, for the hed, I'd suggested "The Kaufman Paradox." that
speaks to the non-crowd-pleasing first sentence of the dek. But I can
live with charlie kaufman: the director's cut. Happy to defer to the
crowd.<br /><br />
I've gone back and looked over the blog. Unfortunately, there really
isn't anything to replace #2. The only other option is a fairly boring
and pretentious screed I wrote to Nancy before I'd seen the movie. You
can see it <a href="http://www.spd.org/mt/mt-static/html/blog.wired.com/storyboard/2008/08/shaping_the_sto.html">here</a> if you like -- but I'm sure
all will agree that what we have is better.<br /><br />
One thing I do think we need to do: remove the date from the assignment
letter. In reality, this actually took place AFTER #2 and #3, once we
knew&nbsp; kaufman would participate. I think we can fudge and put it first,
for clarity's sake, but we should remove the date.<br /></blockquote>


<blockquote><b>On Sep 20, 2008, at 2:10 PM, Jacob Young &lt;Jacob_Young@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b><br />I'll work on the display. I know the multiple repetitions of "Kaufman"
at the&nbsp; top of the story is deliberate, but it could also be a bit
annoying. <br /><br />
Also, we need a caption on the second spread photo...<br /></blockquote>

<blockquote><b>On 9/20/08 2:23 PM, "John Birdsall" &lt;John_Birdsall@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b><br />Here's the hed/dek Jason and I both like:<br /><br /><b>
The Kaufman Paradox</b><br /><i>
Hollywood's brainiest screenwriter pleases crowds by refusing to be
crowd-pleasing. His directorial debut comes with the usual existential
despair, absurdist humor, and intellectual mischief. Go ahead--have a
little gray matter with your Raisinets.</i><br /></blockquote>
<blockquote><b>On 9/20/08 2:30 PM, "Jacob Young" &lt;Jacob_Young@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b><br />A tiny rhythm adjustment...<br /><br /><i>
He's one of Hollywood's brainiest artists, a screenwriter who pleases
crowds by refusing to be crowd-pleasing. His debut as a director comes
packed with existential despair, absurdist humor, and intellectual
mischief. Go ahead -- have a little gray matter with your Raisinets.</i><br /></blockquote>

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<entry>
    <title>Part 26: The Final Layout</title>
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    <id>tag:www.spd.org,2008:/the-process//13.592</id>

    <published>2008-09-24T21:44:20Z</published>
    <updated>2008-09-24T22:46:53Z</updated>

    <summary>Now that the back-and-forth with the hed and dek had subsided (settling on The Kaufman Paradox), I looked to making my final moves with the layout. Normally, I&apos;d like more time to consider a design more carefully, but we had...</summary>
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        <![CDATA[Now that the back-and-forth with the hed and dek had subsided (settling on <b>The Kaufman Paradox</b>), I looked to making my final moves with the layout. Normally, I'd like more time to consider a design more carefully, but we had to make do with the remaining time we had. I took into consideration the pacing of the November feature
well and the positioning of this story at the end of the magazine. It
was definitely calling for a more impactful typographic hit since the well lacked a forceful piece of design done with type only, let alone big type. True,
it's a cliché with designers, the "just make the type huge" move, but
in this case, I felt like it was warranted. So I made the headline larger and the dek a bit smaller, looking for awkwardness in the way I ragged the copy. <br />]]>
        <![CDATA[I also went in and
played around with the width and heft of the black bars running through
the gutters. I wanted to create a little more tension with the body
copy and look for more rhythm with the section breaks. So you'll see
some changes here and there with those elements. <br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-file" style="display: inline;"><a href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/16.11FF.KAUFMAN.pdf">Dowload the final layout here.</a></span><br /><br />At this
point, the design work is done and it's time to composite the final
high-resolution photography. Quad Graphics is our printer; they have
a service bureau here in San Francisco where they composite and prepress our pages. For our really high-end color,
photos and illustrations that require special composition or color
work, we stay in-house where Jeff Lysgaard, our supremely talented
production director/colorist, takes charge. <br /><br />These Kaufman shots were fairly straightforward and not in need of a lot of color-correction to make them print
well, so we shipped them off to get what we call "loose color," or
small Veris proofs. Jeff and I examined the proofs under D5000 color
viewing lamps in a specially built color booth and determined slight
color shifts to allow each image to print its best. <br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><a href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/kaufman_loosecolor.jpg"><img alt="kaufman_loosecolor.jpg" src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/kaufman_loosecolor-thumb-500x375.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="375" width="500" /></a></span><br /><div><br /></div><div>After we approve the loose color and once the final copy editing, fact checking, and proofing is done, we get composed Veris proofs back from Quad. These color proofs are our final look at the pages before they go to the printer. Design examines them for any errors, Jeff and our production manager, Ryan Meith, scour the proofs and separations for QC (quality control) and our copy desk gives them a final once-over to make sure the text hasn't reflowed. <br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><img alt="Kaufman_composedcolor.jpg" src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman_composedcolor.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="525" width="700" /></span><br /></div><div><br /><br /></div>]]>
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<entry>
    <title>Part 25: Factcheck</title>
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    <id>tag:www.spd.org,2008:/the-process//13.587</id>

    <published>2008-09-24T02:07:53Z</published>
    <updated>2008-09-24T02:17:58Z</updated>

    <summary>From researcher Rachel Swaby:My job is to guard the facts, to double-check every statement and make sure no mistakes slip through. I started working on this after receiving Bob&apos;s edit, feeding the writer and editor a stream of updates and...</summary>
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        <![CDATA[From researcher Rachel Swaby:<br /><br /><blockquote>My job is to guard the facts, to double-check every statement and make sure no mistakes slip through. I started working on this after receiving <a href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/2008/09/part-12-the-edit.php">Bob's edit</a>, feeding the writer and editor a stream of updates and corrections throughout the process.</blockquote>]]>
        <![CDATA[<blockquote>Jason sent me a list of contacts as well as his recorded interviews to
work from. I sent an email to everyone mentioned in the story asking
them to confirm any facts that Jason got from them. (We don't read back
the sentences, just the facts themselves.) General movie stuff went to
a pr rep for the film. Questions about Jonze went to his assistant and
so on.<br /><br />
This process was especially interesting for me because I would almost
never speak to someone like Kaufman directly; my correspondence is
usually filtered through a publicist or assistant. But within an hour
of sending Kaufman 40+ questions, he called me to discuss - a thrill to
say the least.<br /><br />
I kept track of all the fact changes, and sent them to Nancy so she could incorporate them into the text (that memo is below).<br /><br />
I also make sure to go through the proof, to make sure all my
corrections have been added, and to make sure nothing else has come up.
As you can see by the page above, I went over my copy line by line,
crossing out every word as I went back over my notes. After I cleared
my suggestions with Jason and Nancy, the story went back to the copy
desk. I get one more look at it after this, when the story goes to
final proof.<br /><br /></blockquote><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-file" style="display: inline;"><a href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/kaufman_factcheck.pdf">Download the factcheck file here.</a></span>


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<entry>
    <title>Part 24: The Headline</title>
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    <id>tag:www.spd.org,2008:/the-process//13.586</id>

    <published>2008-09-24T01:15:50Z</published>
    <updated>2008-09-24T01:25:45Z</updated>

    <summary>Generally speaking, the task of writing the headline (or &quot;hed&quot;) and subhead (or &quot;dek&quot;) falls to our display-copy team of executive editor Bob Cohn, managing editor Jake Young, plus story editors Sarah Fallon and Jon Eilenberg. This time, though, a...</summary>
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        <name>Scott Dadich</name>
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        <![CDATA[Generally speaking, the task of writing the headline (or "hed") and subhead (or "dek") falls to our display-copy team of executive editor Bob Cohn, managing editor Jake Young, plus story editors Sarah Fallon and Jon Eilenberg. This time, though, a number of us weren't satisfied with "Puzzle Master," the headline that made it into the layout. Nancy and Jason asked Bob and Jake if we could come up with some alternatives. This is the conversation that followed. By the end, everyone was pretty much signed off, although the dek continued to get tweaked on the final proof.<br /> ]]>
        <![CDATA[<blockquote><b>On Sep 19, 2008, at 11:16 AM, Jason Tanz &lt;Jason_Tanz@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b><br />
OK, we've come up with a few alternatives.<br /><br />
Head Master<br />
Uneasy Writer<br />
And, you knew it was coming:<br />
[Clever Headline Here]<br /></blockquote>

<blockquote><b>On Sep 19, 2008, at 11:32 AM, Bob Cohn &lt;Bob_Cohn@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b><br />Puns puns puns.<br /><br />
Chris hates em<br /></blockquote>

Jason followed up by sending a couple more ideas Nancy's way.<br />
<br />
<blockquote><b>On 9/19/08 1:11 PM, "Jason Tanz" &lt;Jason_Tanz@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b><br />
Sigh. Well, here are a couple others. Not really crazy about any of em. What do you think:<br /><br />
Kaufman Unbound<br />
Welcome To the Not-So-Funhouse<br />
[or just Not-So-Funhouse]<br />
The Man Who Cannot Be Summed Up In a Headline<br />
Or my favorite, which is certainly not even worth suggesting:<br />
This Headline Doesn't Work<br /></blockquote>

Meanwhile, I was independently lobbying Jake for a new headline.<br />
<br /><blockquote><b>
On 9/19/08 4:32 PM, "Scott Dadich" &lt;scott@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b><br />
any way you guys would consider a different Kaufman hed?<br /><br />
Puzzle Master just sort of lays there, seems a little deflated...<br /><br />
(not carrying Jason's water here, I was going to ask anyway)<br /></blockquote>


<blockquote><b>On 9/19/08 4:33 PM, "Jacob Young" &lt;Jacob_Young@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b><br />Not wedded to Puzzle Master, but haven't heard anything better yet.<br /></blockquote>
<blockquote><b>On Sep 19, 2008, at 5:12 PM, Jason Tanz wrote:</b><br />Hm. This may not be perfect, but:<br /><br />
Kaufman's Paradox<br />
He wrote such mind-bending films as Adaptation and Eternal Sunshine of
the Spotless Mind. But with his directorial debut, has Hollywood's
biggest brain gotten too smart for his own good?<br /></blockquote>

<blockquote><b>On Sep 19, 2008, at 5:16 PM, Scott Dadich wrote:</b><br />i like that and can do something cool with that type<br /></blockquote>
<blockquote><b>On Sep 19, 2008, at 5:53 PM, Jacob Young wrote:</b><br />Sounds nice and very Wired-but explain the paradox part to your dense managing editor, please.<br /></blockquote>
Jake had a point; we couldn't put "paradox" in the headline without
delivering a paradox in the dek. We set to work trying to come up with
something.<br />
<br /><blockquote><b>
On Sep 19, 2008, at 6:24 PM, Scott Dadich wrote:</b><br />
he does nutty shit-which made him successful-which led to directing this movie-which is nutty-which may be his downfall.<br /><br />
?<br /></blockquote>

<blockquote><b>On Sep 19, 2008, at 7:06 PM, Tanz, Jason wrote:</b><br />Hollywood's brainiest screenwriter pleases crowds by refusing to be
crowd-pleasing. His directorial debut is his trickiest film to date.
This time, has he gotten too smart for his own good?<br /><br />
Paradox is only in the first sentence. What do you think?<br /></blockquote>

<blockquote><b>On Sep 19, 2008, at 7:11 PM, Scott Dadich wrote:</b><br />i like, but it seems like it needs a transition from that first sentence to the second...feels a touch choppy?<br /></blockquote>
<blockquote><b>On Sep 19, 2008, at 7:14 PM, Tanz, Jason wrote:</b><br />What if we change "trickiest" to "least compromising"? Follows crowdpleasing...<br /></blockquote>
<blockquote><b>On Sep 19, 2008, at 7:26 PM, Scott Dadich wrote:</b><br />mm, yes.<br /></blockquote>
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<entry>
    <title>Part 23: The Scrub</title>
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    <published>2008-09-20T19:36:44Z</published>
    <updated>2008-09-20T19:49:51Z</updated>

    <summary>So now we&apos;ve been through a first edit, a top edit, and a copy edit. Chris Anderson has read it through and given Jason and Nancy the thumbs-up (whew!). But we&apos;re not done yet. After the layout is finished and...</summary>
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        <name>Scott Dadich</name>
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        So now we&apos;ve been through a first edit, a top edit, and a copy edit. Chris Anderson has read it through and given Jason and Nancy the thumbs-up (whew!). But we&apos;re not done yet. After the layout is finished and approved, the story editor fits it -- cuts or (rarely) stretches to fit the allotted space--and sends it on to the &quot;scrub&quot; editor, whose job is to continue polishing, look for any logic errors or reporting holes, identify structural issues, and so on. Here&apos;s the scrub edit for this story, below; scrub editor John Birdsall&apos;s comments are in blue ink, and Nancy&apos;s and Jason&apos;s responses are in red. 
        <![CDATA[<span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-file" style="display: inline;"><a href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/kaufman_scrub.pdf">Download the "scrub" printouts here.</a></span><br /><br />Another note: In the end, we lost the "One of these sentences is a lie"
intro when we decided to run part of the first sentence as display copy
on the opening spread. It would have been too jarring to have that
non-traditional beginning displayed so prominently, and separate from
the rest of the piece. Jason always had mixed feelings about it, so he
wasn't too sad to see it go.<br />
<br />
Also, we toyed with a few headlines--ultimately, a decision for our
display-copy gurus: managing editor Jake Young, executive editor Bob
Cohn, and our corral of scrub editors. "Unadapted" was deemed too
subtle. They tried "Charlie Kaufman: The Director's Cut," but it would
be odd to have Kaufman's name twice on the same spread in big display
copy, and we didn't want to change the first sentence. So for right
now, They're going with "Puzzle Master," but like I said in my last
post, I'm going to try and get it changed. I don't like how it looks on
the layout. It just sort of lays there. <br /><div><br /></div>]]>
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<entry>
    <title>Part 22: &quot;The Wrong Theory&quot;</title>
    <link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/2008/09/part-22-a-new-layout.php" />
    <id>tag:www.spd.org,2008:/the-process//13.577</id>

    <published>2008-09-20T02:46:07Z</published>
    <updated>2008-09-20T04:19:50Z</updated>

    <summary>After my disastrous presentation to Chris, I slunk back into work on Tuesday and tried a new tact. I figured I would go completely stark, something strange and awkward. I received a new headline: &quot;Charlie Kaufman, The Director&apos;s Cut&quot; and...</summary>
    <author>
        <name>Scott Dadich</name>
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        After my disastrous presentation to Chris, I slunk back into work on Tuesday and tried a new tact. I figured I would go completely stark, something strange and awkward. I received a new headline: &quot;Charlie Kaufman, The Director&apos;s Cut&quot; and started to play. I threw together a secondary spread, just to have something to work backward from. It looked like this:
        <![CDATA[<br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><img alt="Kaufman_revise3.jpg" src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman_revise3.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="341" width="500" /></span><br /><br />Working from there, I cleared the decks and started messing around with a big swath of white and little articulating pieces of copy, like so:<br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><img alt="Kaufman_revise1.jpg" src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/Kaufman_revise1.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="341" width="500" /></span><br /><br /> <div>It felt a little generic, so I went with a bolder version of my sans serif, Exchange. I also moved the copy blocks around a bit, looking for more tension and awkwardness:<br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><img alt="Kaufman_revise2.jpg" src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman_revise2.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="340" width="500" /></span><br /><br />Somewhat satisfied, I emailed this version to Chris, who was traveling. He liked the direction, but was concerned that we were overplaying the pitch letter (the fine print in the above layout) so I enlisted my associate art director, Margaret Swart, to take up the task of exploring this idea and visualizing the turn pages. She's a tremendous designer, really attuned to the intracacies of white space, finding tension and sophistication with the most banal of things. <br /><br />She came up with the following variations on this theme:<br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><a href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman1.jpg" onclick="window.open('http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman1.jpg','popup','width=1151,height=782,scrollbars=no,resizable=no,toolbar=no,directories=no,location=no,menubar=no,status=no,left=0,top=0'); return false"><img src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/assets_c/2008/09/Kaufman1-thumb-500x339.jpg" alt="Kaufman1.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="339" width="500" /></a></span><br /></div><div><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><a href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman2-thumb-500x339.jpg" onclick="window.open('http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman2-thumb-500x339.jpg','popup','width=500,height=339,scrollbars=no,resizable=no,toolbar=no,directories=no,location=no,menubar=no,status=no,left=0,top=0'); return false"><img src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/assets_c/2008/09/Kaufman2-thumb-500x339-thumb-500x339.jpg" alt="Thumbnail image for Kaufman2.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="339" width="500" /></a></span><br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><a href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman3.jpg" onclick="window.open('http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman3.jpg','popup','width=1151,height=782,scrollbars=no,resizable=no,toolbar=no,directories=no,location=no,menubar=no,status=no,left=0,top=0'); return false"><img src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman3-thumb-500x339.jpg" alt="Kaufman3.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="339" width="500" /></a></span><br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><a href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman4.jpg" onclick="window.open('http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman4.jpg','popup','width=1151,height=782,scrollbars=no,resizable=no,toolbar=no,directories=no,location=no,menubar=no,status=no,left=0,top=0'); return false"><img src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman4-thumb-500x339.jpg" alt="Kaufman4.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="339" width="500" /></a></span><br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><a href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman5.jpg" onclick="window.open('http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman5.jpg','popup','width=1151,height=782,scrollbars=no,resizable=no,toolbar=no,directories=no,location=no,menubar=no,status=no,left=0,top=0'); return false"><img src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman5-thumb-500x339.jpg" alt="Kaufman5.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="339" width="500" /></a></span><br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><a href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman6.jpg" onclick="window.open('http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman6.jpg','popup','width=1151,height=782,scrollbars=no,resizable=no,toolbar=no,directories=no,location=no,menubar=no,status=no,left=0,top=0'); return false"><img src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman6-thumb-500x339.jpg" alt="Kaufman6.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="339" width="500" /></a></span><br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><a href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman7.jpg" onclick="window.open('http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman7.jpg','popup','width=1151,height=782,scrollbars=no,resizable=no,toolbar=no,directories=no,location=no,menubar=no,status=no,left=0,top=0'); return false"><img src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman7-thumb-500x339.jpg" alt="Kaufman7.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="339" width="500" /></a></span><br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><a href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman8.jpg" onclick="window.open('http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman8.jpg','popup','width=1151,height=782,scrollbars=no,resizable=no,toolbar=no,directories=no,location=no,menubar=no,status=no,left=0,top=0'); return false"><img src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman8-thumb-500x339.jpg" alt="Kaufman8.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="339" width="500" /></a></span><br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><a href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman9.jpg" onclick="window.open('http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman9.jpg','popup','width=1151,height=782,scrollbars=no,resizable=no,toolbar=no,directories=no,location=no,menubar=no,status=no,left=0,top=0'); return false"><img src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman9-thumb-500x339.jpg" alt="Kaufman9.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="339" width="500" /></a></span><br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><a href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman10.jpg" onclick="window.open('http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman10.jpg','popup','width=1151,height=782,scrollbars=no,resizable=no,toolbar=no,directories=no,location=no,menubar=no,status=no,left=0,top=0'); return false"><img src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman10-thumb-500x339.jpg" alt="Kaufman10.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="339" width="500" /></a></span><br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><a href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman11.jpg" onclick="window.open('http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman11.jpg','popup','width=1151,height=782,scrollbars=no,resizable=no,toolbar=no,directories=no,location=no,menubar=no,status=no,left=0,top=0'); return false"><img src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman11-thumb-500x339.jpg" alt="Kaufman11.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="339" width="500" /></a></span><br /><br />This last one was my favorite. <br /><br />I have a design theory I've developed in my time here at WIRED. I call it "<b>The Wrong Theory</b>." In my years in magazines, whenever I've been pleased with a layout at the time I ship it to the printer, I'm usually disappointed with the result when I go back to it after some time has passed. It's like with a record. When you buy a new release and you love it immediately, it usually has a short lifespan. You play it till your ears bleed and two weeks later, it's discarded to a pile of CDs in the backseat of your car, never to be listened to again. But an album that's more challenging--something you don't like on first listen--can often be the most rewarding given time and attention. I have albums that I've hated on first listen, then let sit and age and when I come back to them with fresh ears, I've really enjoyed their complexity and novelty. I've experienced a similar phenomenon with design. Work (whether I've done it or someone else has) that I've actively disliked tends to grow on me with time and distance. <br /><br />So my theory is: <i>Take a layout you like and fuck it up.</i> Ruin it. Add to it, take away from it, just do something that makes your skin crawl, and go with it. Ship it, print it, swallow your discomfort and go with it. (It doesn't work with <i>everything</i>; sometimes you really can ruin a nice piece, so be careful.) With time, you'll come around to it and again, in my experience, the work that I'm most proud of in my portfolio has been work that I've disliked with at completion. <br /><br />In the past 18 months at WIRED, I've preached this theory with my designers and art directors and we all try and implement The Wrong Theory in our pages. We (and I) get flack for it. Bob doesn't always get it, and neither does Chris, but believe me, there's method to my madness. <br /><br />So what appealed to me about this spread was all of the things that I've learned to be open to in practicing The Wrong Theory. Weird tension? Check. Awkward spacing? Check. Strange rag? Check. Placing photos against the bleed? Check. <br /><br />So I showed Bob what I was up to. I don't think he liked it, but he understood the situation and my strange propensities and shrugged his shoulders. His one complaint was the echo of having "Charlie Kaufman" in the headline and the dek, so he suggested a new headline, which I did not like. But I knew I had just won a battle in the war, so I saved that conversation for another day. There was plenty more work to do. <br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><a href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman12.jpg" onclick="window.open('http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman12.jpg','popup','width=1150,height=781,scrollbars=no,resizable=no,toolbar=no,directories=no,location=no,menubar=no,status=no,left=0,top=0'); return false"><img src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/Kaufman12-thumb-500x339.jpg" alt="Kaufman12.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="339" width="500" /></a></span><br /></div><div><br /></div>]]>
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<entry>
    <title>Part 21: Showing the Layout</title>
    <link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/2008/09/part-21-layout-changes.php" />
    <id>tag:www.spd.org,2008:/the-process//13.576</id>

    <published>2008-09-20T01:49:37Z</published>
    <updated>2008-09-20T02:36:52Z</updated>

    <summary>It&apos;s been a crazy week. We&apos;re doing a huge (18-page) infographic as our November cover story and that&apos;s taken a sizeable bite out of my time these past few days--so apologies for the lack of updates these past few days....</summary>
    <author>
        <name>Scott Dadich</name>
        <uri>http://www.spd.org/mt/mt-cp.cgi?__mode=view&amp;blog_id=13&amp;id=5</uri>
    </author>
    
        <category term="Controversy" scheme="http://www.sixapart.com/ns/types#category" />
    
    <category term="chrisanderson" label="Chris Anderson" scheme="http://www.sixapart.com/ns/types#tag" />
    <category term="design" label="design" scheme="http://www.sixapart.com/ns/types#tag" />
    <category term="editing" label="editing" scheme="http://www.sixapart.com/ns/types#tag" />
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        <![CDATA[It's been a crazy week. <br /><br />We're doing a <i>huge</i> (18-page) infographic as our November cover story and that's taken a sizeable bite out of my time these past few days--so apologies for the lack of updates these past few days. But on September 15, I showed <a href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/2008/09/part-18-opener-progress.php">this</a> version of the layout to Bob, Nancy, Jason, Anna and Wyatt. This meeting is called "Presentation" on our tracking sheet; it's typically a point when Wyatt and I are reasonably sure of the design direction--we have a working hed and dek--and live photo selects are placed in a layout. <br /> ]]>
        <![CDATA[This meeting is structured to give Bob a chance to weigh in, to
address any concerns he may have, to ask questions or simply affirm the
chosen direction. Usually, he has a good sense of what he's going to
see, so there aren't any huge surprises. But sometimes, the design may
not have worked out, or I've suggested an alternative approach, another
set of display copy, or we've scrapped our plans entirely and we need
to show our new idea. The story editor (Nancy) is at this meeting to
answer questions and offer her perspective and although Jason was at
this meeting, writers are almost always not invited. <br /><br />While it's not essential, having Bob's blessing for a layout is really helpful in the next stage, when I show Chris Anderson, our EIC. In this case, Bob liked
what he saw, which really surprised me. I thought the
sideways type might throw him for a loop, but in fact, he really
responded to it. We debated the merits of the highlighting, we talked
about using the thumbnail movie stills and we assessed our needs for
display copy. Nancy and Jason had some good suggestions and so we all
agreed to show Chris the opener later in the day. <br /><br />A Chris meeting is a slightly more formal affair. Bob and I try to gather a few layouts at once, so that we can kill a few birds with one stone. We lay trimmed spreads out on a big table in our magazine room and talk through our theories, presenting the progress of the piece. Wyatt and I speak to the design and Bob speaks to the edit and the story and the editor is present to answer Chris' questions (and again, in this case, Jason was present). So we showed him a few other stories and then this layout:<br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><img alt="3.jpg" src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/3.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="340" width="500" /></span><br />
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&nbsp;&nbsp; <br />When Chris sighed and put both hands over his face, I knew it was trouble. I explained what I had done, tried to walk through my design moves, but sensing the coming rejection, I can't say it was my finest moment of rationalization. Chris asked where the photo of Charlie was. He <i>hated</i> the sideways type. He felt like we were being confrontational with the design, challenging our readers. I tried to explain that I had done that to reference Kaufman's work. He thought it was too wordy. I said he's a writer. No dice. Bob and Wyatt leapt in to help, but it was too late. Chris wasn't buying what I was selling. He wanted something <i>much</i> simpler. <br /><br />Back to the drawing board.&nbsp; <br /><div><br /><br /></div>]]>
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<entry>
    <title>Part 20: The Self-Portrait</title>
    <link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/2008/09/part-20-the-self-portrait.php" />
    <id>tag:www.spd.org,2008:/the-process//13.570</id>

    <published>2008-09-19T18:46:29Z</published>
    <updated>2008-09-19T19:17:19Z</updated>

    <summary><![CDATA[From Anna Alexander:Sometime around the first day of the Toronto International Film Festival (Sept. 5), I lost touch with the publicist.&nbsp; I hate nagging and constantly emailing/calling, but there comes a point where it becomes necessary. I knew that since...]]></summary>
    <author>
        <name>Scott Dadich</name>
        <uri>http://www.spd.org/mt/mt-cp.cgi?__mode=view&amp;blog_id=13&amp;id=5</uri>
    </author>
    
        <category term="Photography" scheme="http://www.sixapart.com/ns/types#category" />
    
    <category term="charliekaufman" label="Charlie Kaufman" scheme="http://www.sixapart.com/ns/types#tag" />
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        <![CDATA[From Anna Alexander:<br /><br />Sometime around the first day of the Toronto International Film Festival (Sept. 5), I lost touch with the publicist.&nbsp; I hate nagging and constantly emailing/calling, but there comes a point where it becomes necessary. I knew that since he is primarily the film's publicist (Kaufman does not have his own) that he would be in Toronto working like a madman, so I hung tight, just waiting for any self-portrait update.&nbsp; Scott would pass my desk every morning and his expression was like "anything yet?"&nbsp; I had nothing.<br />]]>
        <![CDATA[<br />On Monday, Sept. 8, I knew that Jason was having breakfast with
Kaufman the next morning in Toronto. Hence, I did what no photo editor
likes to do.&nbsp; I asked the writer for help.&nbsp; I know that sounds
arrogant, but it's my job to secure a subject for a shoot.<br /><br /><b>9/8/08</b><br /><br /><blockquote><b>From: Anna Alexander &lt;Anna_Alexander@wired.com&gt;</b><br />Date: Mon, 08 Sep 2008 12:17:37 -0700<br />To:
Nancy Miller &lt;Nancy_Miller@wiredmag.com&gt;, Jason Tanz
&lt;Jason_Tanz@wired.com&gt;, Scott Dadich &lt;scott@wired.com&gt;<br />Subject: Kaufman photo<br /><br />Still
haven't heard from the publicist, I would love to assume he's way busy-
but it makes me nervous.&nbsp; I honestly think we should start thinking
illo to get something going (since presentation date is in one week).&nbsp;
There's mass stock of him out there (red carpet) if you want me to
start pulling.&nbsp; Also, I know that Jason is meeting with Kaufman
tomorrow morning for breakfast.&nbsp; I HATE bringing in the writer on
situations like this, but I might request you ask about the
self-portrait.&nbsp; I'll keep trying the publicist, of course.<br /></blockquote><blockquote><b>On 9/8/08 15:19 AM, "Jason Tanz" &lt;Jason_Tanz@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b><br />I'm meeting him one last time tomorrow morning, and can ask him.<br /></blockquote><blockquote><b>On 9/8/08 16:19 AM, "Scott Dadich" &lt;scott@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b><br />Oh please oh please oh please<br /></blockquote><b>9/9/08</b><br /><br /><blockquote><b>On 9/9/08 7:03 AM, "Jason Tanz" &lt;Jason_Tanz@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b><br />His wife is going to send me something today. Will forward when I land.<br /></blockquote><blockquote><b>On 9/9/08 7:26 AM, "Scott Dadich" &lt;scott@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b><br />Well done, sir! Fingers crossed!<br /></blockquote><blockquote><b>On 9/9/08 8:57 AM, "Anna Alexander"&nbsp; &lt;Anna_Alexander@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b><br />good going Jason!!<br /></blockquote><b>9/11/08</b><br /><br /><blockquote><b>From: Jason Tanz &lt;Jason_Tanz@wired.com&gt;</b><br />Date: Thu, 11 Sep 2008 09:31:26 -0700<br />To: Anna Alexander &lt;Anna_Alexander@wired.com&gt;, Scott Dadich &lt;scott@wired.com&gt;<br />Subject: FW: C Kaufman photograph<br /><br />HERE IT IS!!!!!<br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><a href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/16.11FF.kaufman.dh.55124.jpg"><img alt="16.11FF.kaufman.dh.55124.jpg" src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/16.11FF.kaufman.dh.55124-thumb-500x751.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="751" width="500" /></a></span><br /></blockquote><div><br /></div>]]>
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<entry>
    <title>Part 19: The Copyedit</title>
    <link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/2008/09/part-19-the-copyedit.php" />
    <id>tag:www.spd.org,2008:/the-process//13.562</id>

    <published>2008-09-19T02:52:23Z</published>
    <updated>2008-09-19T03:05:02Z</updated>

    <summary>From Brian Dustrud, copy editor:This is our first hardcopy stage. Every edit from here on in will be done mostly on paper, with proofs being handed back and forth from copy editors to researchers to editors. The story&apos;s main editor,...</summary>
    <author>
        <name>Scott Dadich</name>
        <uri>http://www.spd.org/mt/mt-cp.cgi?__mode=view&amp;blog_id=13&amp;id=5</uri>
    </author>
    
        <category term="Editing" scheme="http://www.sixapart.com/ns/types#category" />
    
    <category term="charliekaufman" label="Charlie Kaufman" scheme="http://www.sixapart.com/ns/types#tag" />
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        <![CDATA[From Brian Dustrud, copy editor:<br /><br /><blockquote>This is our first hardcopy stage. Every edit from here on in will be done mostly on paper, with proofs being handed back and forth from copy editors to researchers to editors. The story's main editor, Nancy Miller, is arbiter of which changes get rejected, which get integrated, and which require further study. As you'll see from my notes on the pages, the copy editor does more than check basic spelling and grammar. It's also my job to point out holes in the logic, imprecise turns of phrase, and other weaknesses, both minor and major, as I see them. And overuse of commas. Nancy then goes over these with the writer, if necessary, and gives it all back to me to enter into the electronic file.<br /></blockquote> ]]>
        <![CDATA[<blockquote>Despite it's presence on this blog, there was nothing special about the
Kaufman feature. I read the pitch and some of the discussion about
presenting our process here, so I assumed my edits would be scanned and
uploaded as part of this project, but I don't think that altered my
approach. But I did consciously avoid looking at the rough draft or the
first edit posted on this blog, since I don't generally see those for
any story.<br /><br />
DISCLAIMER: Unlike the previous editors, I don't have the benefit of
disclaiming responsibility for spelling and other errors. So I'll just
say that If my edits are electronically entered correctly, the next
version will be flawless. Except for perhaps factual errors. And maybe
a typo or two. Not to worry, at least two more copy editors, a couple
of researchers, and as many as 300 editors will all add their thoughts
on this feature before it hits the magazine pages.<br /><br /></blockquote><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-file" style="display: inline;"><a href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/kaufman165.pdf">Download Copyedit Notes</a></span>
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</entry>

<entry>
    <title>Part 18: Opener Progress</title>
    <link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/2008/09/part-18-opener-progress.php" />
    <id>tag:www.spd.org,2008:/the-process//13.533</id>

    <published>2008-09-15T01:19:52Z</published>
    <updated>2008-09-15T01:45:54Z</updated>

    <summary>Overnight, I thought about the opener and reread my previous post. I thought about how to make the content a little more front and center, how to make the opening spread a little more interesting and a little more visually...</summary>
    <author>
        <name>Scott Dadich</name>
        <uri>http://www.spd.org/mt/mt-cp.cgi?__mode=view&amp;blog_id=13&amp;id=5</uri>
    </author>
    
        <category term="Design" scheme="http://www.sixapart.com/ns/types#category" />
    
    <category term="charliekaufman" label="Charlie Kaufman" scheme="http://www.sixapart.com/ns/types#tag" />
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        <![CDATA[Overnight, I thought about the opener and reread my previous post. I thought about how to make the content a little more front and center, how to make the opening spread a little more interesting and a little more visually dynamic. Typically, it's pretty easy to recognize a profile's subject--there's usually a photo or an illustration of the protagonist. In this case, there isn't a usable main image (by choice, obviously. I could have just commissioned an illustration of Kaufman, but chose not to. That's the <i>easy</i> way out, plus we were hoping to get a self-portrait of the man.)<br />]]>
        <![CDATA[ So today, I played around with a couple variations on
yesterday's theme, but this time looking at playing up Kaufman's name,
shortening the dek (and splitting it from the headline, looking for a
pithier, <i>New Yorker</i>-style treatment). I also had the idea of
inserting production stills from each of Kaufman's movies, and placing
them adjacent to their references in the lede. <br /><br />It looks pretty
cool, I think, so I'm going to keep going along this path. I need to
start laying out the rest of the story--it's running 7 pages--but first
I need to show this layout to Bob Cohn, our executive editor, and see
what he thinks. I don't necessarily have to accept his feedback, but it
will make it easier in convincing Chris Anderson if he agrees with
where I'm going. He'll probably have some good suggestions for me and
start thinking about how to position the display copy, so once I get
his buy-in and feedback, I'll investigate the turn pages. <br /><br />But
I'm running dangerously behind. This story is supposed to go into what
we call "copyfit" Monday, which means that the layout should be blocked
out and ready for Nancy to trim the galley to fit, write pullquotes and
captions. First, I'll need to get with Anna to pull stills from <i>Adaptation, Eternal Sunshine,</i> and <i>Being John Malkovich</i> in order to make some progress.<br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><img alt="1.jpg" src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/1.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="340" width="500" /></span><br /><div><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><img alt="2.jpg" src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/2.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="340" width="500" /></span><br /><br /><span class="mt-enclosure mt-enclosure-image" style="display: inline;"><img alt="3.jpg" src="http://www.spd.org/the-process/images/blog/3.jpg" class="mt-image-none" style="" height="340" width="500" /></span><br /></div><div><br /></div>]]>
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<entry>
    <title>Part 17: Designing the Opener</title>
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    <id>tag:www.spd.org,2008:/the-process//13.531</id>

    <published>2008-09-14T00:57:36Z</published>
    <updated>2008-09-14T01:36:53Z</updated>

    <summary>Time for design. But first, a little about the WIRED design department and how we work. It consists of me, design director Wyatt Mitchell, art directors Carl DeTorres and Maili Holiman, associate art director Margaret Swart, senior designer Christy Sheppard,...</summary>
    <author>
        <name>Scott Dadich</name>
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        <![CDATA[Time for design. But first, a little about the WIRED design department and how we work. It consists of me, design director Wyatt Mitchell, art directors Carl DeTorres and Maili Holiman, associate art director Margaret Swart, senior designer Christy Sheppard, and contributing designers Walter Baumann and Victor Krummenacher. <br /> ]]>
        <![CDATA[Wyatt, Carl, Maili and I all design feature stories. Typically, Wyatt
and I both work in equal measure in setting the pace and look of our
features, but Carl and Maili are tremendously talented designers in
their own right. This creates the lucky situation of being able to
collaborate--passing pages back and forth--as well as acting as editors
for one another, offering critiques and solutions for problems. And we
often involve Margaret, Christy, Victor and Walter into this equation.
As our FOB designers, they deal with small pieces of design all day
every day and are sometimes better suited to deal with bitsy pieces,
charts/infographics or marginalia. <br />
<br />
At this point, the layout for Kaufman <i>should</i> already be well underway, but it's not. This is one of our largest issues of the year <i>and</i> we're cramming a hugely ambitious 18-page atlas into the mix, so it's taken <i>all</i>
of Maili and Carl's time. That leaves Wyatt and I to design the rest of
the well, and I've been in New York most of the week shooting for the
very same atlas that Maili and Carl are working on. So I'm pretty far
behind schedule. <br />
<br />
Today is Saturday and I'm up here at the office fleshing out my ideas
for the opener. As I wrote about last night, I have this notion of
doing something that will of course look good but fit the theme of
recursiveness Jason has set up, and it needs to work without a photo on
the opener. We've sort of nixed the idea of running the rough draft in
agate type alongside the final story, simply because we felt like it
wouldn't be a fulfilling exercise for the reader. Jason's 00 was so
clean and well-structured, the edits were fairly minimal.<br />
<br />
I asked Bob to write a headline and dek yesterday, and on his way out,
he mentioned an idea that I had sort of been thinking about myself. He
said we should just do a minimal hed/dek and just start the story out
really huge, let the lede itself function as display copy.<br /><br />I thought about that and decided to try it, but maybe going a little more unconventional with it, so I turned the graf on its side, cutting in some super tiny (5/6) type, which I decided should be the pitch letter. <br /><br />So this took me about three hours of fussing and playing to get here. I'm liking it, visually. I'm not sure that it's the right way to go, but there's something there. I don't like the rag of the copy as it runs along the top edge. I think I want to make that dek shorter, so i can make the type larger (maybe privileging his name more), ensuring that when you open this spread, you quickly know it's about Kaufman. The pitch letter looks cool in there, the dramatic size and orientation shift of the copy provides a nice tension, I'm just not sure that we're doing something that makes sense yet. It will need a little blurb about it and the other marginalia, maybe there's a fun way to justify it with a punchy little hed/dek there.&nbsp; <br /><br />I dunno. &nbsp; <br />
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<entry>
    <title>Part 16: Starting the Layout</title>
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    <id>tag:www.spd.org,2008:/the-process//13.530</id>

    <published>2008-09-13T17:21:56Z</published>
    <updated>2008-09-13T17:49:59Z</updated>

    <summary>On September 4, I started thinking seriously about the layout and what the design should look like. Given the troubles we had been having securing a photograph of Charlie, I started leaning toward a design that could live independent of...</summary>
    <author>
        <name>Scott Dadich</name>
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        <![CDATA[On September 4, I started thinking seriously about the layout and what the design should look like. Given the troubles we had been having securing a photograph of Charlie, I started leaning toward a design that could live independent of a great portrait or a stylish piece of typography. The other thing on my mind was the GEB undercurrent Jason had tapped into and I started to wonder about running the rough draft in the layout. I put together a sketch and sent it to the gang to gauge their opinion and test its feasibility.&nbsp; ]]>
        <![CDATA[<blockquote>From: Scott Dadich <br />Sent: Thu 9/4/2008 6:52 PM<br />To: Tanz, Jason<br />Cc: Miller, Nancy; Alexander, Anna; Mitchell, Wyatt<br />Subject: layout thoughts<br /><br />Nancy and I talked a little today and I showed her the idea that i mentioned to Bob the other day, the one where I run your 00 in the final layout (sort of DFW-style, in agate type) that ends up in the magazine itself. We'd need to redact any fact-sensitive materials (perhaps in blacklining?), but the advantages could be numerous:<br /><br />A) we get to pepper the agate type with little tiny thumbnails, movie stills, timelines, etc, that might ordinarily run in a sidebar or some such<br /><br />B) we could include NM's edits in redlining?<br /><br />C) you get to see the story progress from 00 to final<br /><br />D) it cleaves nicely with the GEB theme, (which I'm glad to see still in your rough) and keeps with the infinite loop theory that Synedoche holds front and center.<br /><br />This D point is most germane, and it's what I'm sure Bob will want to work though. To my way of thinking , we do this story on 8, and the design is has a fairly light touch and the "wired" part of it is the break in design form. Nobody will need to read the blog bits to know/"get" what we're doing, we could establish with a little fancy footwork in the display writing.<br /><br />my only concern would be that the piece seems fairly straightforward (nice job, btw), but it might seem like we're tapdancing too much with the layout, too gag-y [break out the whoopee cushion!]<br /><br />I dunno, i like how this looks, i'm just starting to sketch here, so see what you and nancy think. If you like, i'd like to pre-cook some display with you all in order to make the sell to CA/BC. maybe we could discuss a bit, when are you back from NY? <br /><br />Wyatt? weigh in here, also want to get Santino or Margaret to think about carving a bit.<br /></blockquote><blockquote><b>On 9/4/08 9:01 PM, "Wyatt Mitchell" &lt;wyatt@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b><br />Weighing in here, in cynical fashion...<br /><br />Sounds good to me except for a few pitfalls I think we should avoid.<br /><br />Are we planning on 'screen-grabbing' the desktop? I hope not. (This is meta, I have to ask).<br /><br />Running the 00 is great but, it has to be on another 'layer', The DFW-style works for footnotes, as do the Post-it notes. This 00 is a entire parallel track. I fear only magazine people know how (or want) to approach a rough.<br /><br />The rough should take on a different feel for the reader. If it were sections of the rough (start-stop-style) peppered with timelines, notes and pics I think it would come off better.<br /><br />Example: A back and forth evolution of one paragraph between JT and NM, then a jump to the protagonists of each of Kaufman's movies (another evolution of sorts), etc...<br /><br />Or a riff on Jason's blackbox theme: the first exchange between JT and CK from their meetings, followed by a blacklined graph, followed thumbnails of failed openers. &nbsp;<br /><br />Maybe we pass the layout between you, me, Santino and Zuzu and then back to you? Sort of Derivatives, or circle of 5ths in music, very GEB.<br /></blockquote><blockquote><b>On 9/5/08 6:48 AM, "Jason Tanz" &lt;Jason_Tanz@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b><br />Hey, all. Thanks for including me in this conversation. <br /></blockquote><blockquote>Just a couple thoughts to add:<br /><br />1. I am always happy to get as many pages as possible, and as many of my words, even if some of em are the same word twice.<br /><br />2. Scott's right, the story itself doesn't hit you over the head with it's meta-ness. There are a few touches in there, that I hope stay in there, but I think of them more as easter eggs for tuned-in readers. That's by design (if you'll pardon the pun), bc I think anything less subtle risks getting gimmicky fast. On the one hand, I think that gives us more room to play with the design. On the other, if we go too far it may seem out of balance with the piece. No conclusions there, just thoughts.<br /><br />3. following Wyatt's thoughts, there are other meta-elements we could add rather than the entire rough. A particularly tricky paragraph makes sense. Or some of the stuff we're posting on the blog. Immediately after the pitch meeting, Eilenberg came up to me and said, "Of course you have to run the pitch as a sidebar." I don't know if htat's a good idea or not, but there are other materials.<br /><br />4. Another thought would be to get meta, not about the text, but about the design itself. I have no idea what that means, but the desing could be more self-referential, less referring to the copy, somehow.<br /><br />Just random musings, take for whatever they're worth, which may be nothing<br /></blockquote><blockquote><b>On 9/5/08 3:29 PM, "Nancy Miller" &lt;Nancy_Miller@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b><br />Hey All,<br /><br />So I'm about to drop the 01 and I realized something: Damn that Jason Tanz, but--at least for now--the 01 and the rough aren't a whole lot different. I did some line editing, asked a few key questions and made a few suggestions but I wonder if it will be a tad disappointing if the drafts aren't wildly different. Obviously, there are many more steps after this (Bob hasn't read and it hasn't been through the whole Wired process yet), but wanted to mention it now. I love the idea of running our 00, but will it be disappointing/redundant if it's close to the original?<br /><br />Nancy<br /></blockquote><blockquote><b>On 9/5/08 3:40 PM, "Scott Dadich" &lt;scott@wired.com&gt; wrote: </b><br />Stupid Tanz, being all good and shit<br /></blockquote><blockquote><b>On 9/5/08 3:42 PM, "Nancy Miller" &lt;Nancy_Miller@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b> <br />I know. Tell me about it.<br /></blockquote><blockquote><b>On 9/5/08 3:44 PM, "Jason Tanz" &lt;Jason_Tanz@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b><br />Oh THIS is definitely going on the blog. <br /><br /></blockquote><blockquote><b>On 9/5/08 3:56 PM, "Scott Dadich" &lt;scott@wired.com&gt; wrote:</b><br />just getting back to this chain.<br /><br />to wyatt's points, no, i wouldn't be including the screen grab, i was just being lazy and didn't want to export a pdf. <br /><br />What if you did run the whole rough, as-is, but you grayed out the sections that didn't seem to change-is this what you mean by blacklining, Wyatt?- (or changed minimally) as a visual cue not to read. you could, in theory, add a whole other layer of detail into the rough, sort of "footnoting the footnote" but that might get too far crazy? or too self-indulgent? does that actually further the GEB thesis? is it germane?<br /><br />I do like the notion of passing the layout around. we'd do that anyway...<br /></blockquote><br /><blockquote><br /></blockquote><br /> ]]>
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<entry>
    <title>Part 15: The Acquisition</title>
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    <id>tag:www.spd.org,2008:/the-process//13.528</id>

    <published>2008-09-13T02:22:58Z</published>
    <updated>2008-09-13T02:27:52Z</updated>

    <summary><![CDATA[From Anna Alexander: While the publicist was waiting to hear back from Kaufman, I thought I'd start bringing in some additional artwork,&nbsp; "pick-up" in photo edit speak.&nbsp; You never know if the editors are suddenly going to want a movie...]]></summary>
    <author>
        <name>Scott Dadich</name>
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        <![CDATA[<p>From Anna Alexander: <br /></p><blockquote><p>While the publicist was waiting to hear back from Kaufman, I thought
I'd start bringing in some additional artwork,&nbsp; "pick-up" in photo edit
speak.&nbsp; You never know if the editors are suddenly going to want a
movie time-line or a sidebar, and you don't want to be scrambling at
the end.&nbsp; The Publicist had sent me a ton of screenshots from Sony Pictures
Classics of <em>Synecdoche, New York</em>, which I logged into our Art
Tracking database (every photo ever is onfile)- each image gets a name
so we can keep track of them, like "16.11FF.kaufman.dl.55089."&nbsp; "16" is
for the Wired year, "11" is November, "FF" is feature, "dl" = digital
low resolution, and the last sequence of digits are the art tracking
number. I know, fascinating.&nbsp; I then created a contact sheet for Scott
and I to go over and make selects.</p>I also dove into some stock photography sites to see what was out
there, just in case we're unable to get exclusive images and we need
reference of Kaufman for an illustration.&nbsp; &nbsp;
I started searching our usual suspects: Getty, Corbis, AP, etc. I've
included a sample of what a stock search for Charlie Kaufman looks like
from Getty Images.</blockquote>

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<entry>
    <title>Part 14: The Edited Draft</title>
    <link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://www.spd.org/the-process/2008/09/part-14-the-edited-draft.php" />
    <id>tag:www.spd.org,2008:/the-process//13.527</id>

    <published>2008-09-13T02:13:55Z</published>
    <updated>2008-09-13T02:21:57Z</updated>

    <summary>From Nancy Miller: Posted are two versions of our Kaufman story: My revise with Jason&apos;s comments/changes/challenges and then the clean version I put together for Wired&apos;s executive editor, Bob Cohn, to read.Right now, I see this story as 85% finished....</summary>
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        <name>Scott Dadich</name>
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        <![CDATA[From Nancy Miller: <br /><br /><blockquote>Posted are two versions of our Kaufman story: My revise with Jason's comments/changes/challenges and then the clean version I put together for Wired's executive editor, Bob Cohn, to read.<br /><br />Right now, I see this story as 85% finished. There are still a few TK's (shorthand for "to come") in need of filling but I'm thinking the piece looks pretty good. There are still a lot of steps to go: Bob's version, with his comments and questions (posting tomorrow), copy editing, fact-checking, art's layout, a process we have here called "scrub," but we'll get to that next week. For now, here's Jason's version and my final (for now) take, presented side-by-side for comparison.<br /><br />Disclaimer: The piece will be fact-checked and copy-edited soon, but for now, this story, like the previous versions, may contain errors.&nbsp;</blockquote> ]]>
        <![CDATA[<p><b><em>FF.Kaufman JTanz Revise</em></b></p>

<p>UNADAPTED</p>
	
 <p>Charlie Kaufman's ability to bend moviegoers' minds has made him one of cinema's most respected <em>auteurs</em>. But with his directorial debut, has Hollywood's brainiest screenwriter gotten too smart for his own good?</p>
	
 <p>By Jason Tanz</p>
	
 <p>There are TK sentences in this story. One of them is false.</p>
	
 <p>[Break]</p>
	
 <p>We
open on Charlie Kaufman, entering an empty room in a French bistro in
Los Angeles. He is slight. A healthy serving of reddish brown curls
burst from his noggin. Two deep vertical creases climb from the bridge
of his nose, the product, one imagines, of countless late-night
brow-furrowing sessions. His wardrobe whispers "hipster-shlub":
short-sleeve Penguin button-down, tan jeans, lime-green socks. Kaufman,
50[CK], has a reputation for shyness, but, as he takes a seat in the
far corner of the restaurant, he speaks directly, rapidly, forcefully.
The conversation begins with some recording difficulties, and Kaufman
smirks. "Every journalist who ever interviews me tells me they don't
know how to work their recorder," he says. "I think it's a bit of a
scam to disarm me or something." [OK, THIS IS MY ATTEMPTED SOLUTION TO
THE QUOTE ISSUE. I DON'T KNOW. I DON'T LOVE BRINGING MYSELF INTO THIS.
BUT I THINK IT'S TOO MUCH TO BRING UP HIS UNEASE ABOUT THE MOVIE AND
ITS RECEPTION RIGHT IN THE TOP GRAF. JUST BEGS TOO MANY QUESTIONS. SO
MAYBE THIS HELPS EASE US INTO THE SCENE, AND ALSO HINTS AT HIS
SELF-CONSCIOUSNESS AND HUMOR?] </p>
	
 <p>Kaufman is here to talk up his directorial debut, <em>Synecdoche, New York</em>,
which comes out on October 24. The film is the Oscar-winning
screenwriter's trickiest to date -- which is really saying something.
Kaufman's previous mind-bending work -- a roster that includes <em>Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind</em>, <em>Adaptation</em>, and <em>Being John Malkovich</em> -- brought meta to the multiplex and established him as the most distinctive and admired screenwriter of his generation. With <em>Synecdoche</em>, Kaufman is attempting to make the jump to full-on <em>auteur</em>
status. It has been five years since he started batting ideas around
with his friend and sometime collaborator Spike Jonze, five long years
during which he worked on nothing but this bleak story of a man's
anxieties, failures, flaws and ultimate demise. The result, <em>Synecdoche, New York</em>,
is a deeply personal, borderline-obsessive story of heartache and death
-- and not the fun kind of death that fills movie theaters, but the
holy-crap-look-at-the-size-of-that-abyss kind of death that fills
Sartre novels<span style="color: blue;">. </span>It is not, in other words, an easy sell. <u>And now he has to plug the thing. [</u><span style="color: blue;">because
it's coming out when TK?] [I PUT THE DATE IN EARLIER. I LIKE ENDING
WITH "AND NOW HE HAS TO PLUG THE THING." IT FEELS LIKE A STRONG END TO
THAT GRAF. THAT OK?]</span></p>
	
 <p>He is not very good at it. The first question is a softball -- How do you feel about this film in relation to your other ones?<u> -- and the answer should be obvious.<span class="msoDel"><del> would seem pre-determined</del></span></u><span class="msoDel"><del> [</del></span><span style="color: blue;"><span class="msoDel"><del>line is little awkard. The standard filmmaker answer is</del></span><span class="msoDel"><del>]</del></span>:</span> <em>I'm prouder of this movie than any I've ever done. Everyone should see it.</em> But Kaufman doesn't do confident. <u>"This
is a difficult period for me right now with this movie, because it's
over and I want it to be over," he says. "Putting it out into the
world, there's a lot of..." He trails off, stares at a point in the
middle distance for a few seconds, then continues.</u> [<span style="color: blue;">Per
my note above, you might want to move this underlined quote up earlier,
then keep this part of the quote here. Not sure if that will work, but
seems like we take a long time to hear from him.]</span> <span class="msoIns"><ins cite="mailto:AMG%20Adavance%20Magazine%20Group" datetime="2008-09-04T09:10">[THIS OK NOW?] </ins></span>"It's
so hard to know what I'm supposed to say. I'm participating in an
article to sell this movie, but what am I supposed to say? 'It's great
and I'm loving it'? It seems to be a tricky thing to sell people on,
and I'm frustrated with that." </p>
	
 <p><u><span class="msoDel"><del>Welcome to the mind of Charlie Kaufman</del></span><span class="msoIns"><ins cite="mailto:AMG%20Adavance%20Magazine%20Group" datetime="2008-09-04T09:10">The mind of Charlie Kaufman may not be the </ins></span></u><span class="msoDel"><del>, [</del></span><span style="color: blue;"><span class="msoDel"><del>I find the "Welcome to" construction a little cliché. Do you need it?] </del></span></span><span class="msoDel"><del>maybe not the </del></span>happiest place on earth, but <span class="msoIns"><ins cite="mailto:AMG%20Adavance%20Magazine%20Group" datetime="2008-09-04T09:10">it is </ins></span>one
of the most fascinating. At a time when most movies measure success by
the number of cornea-frying fireballs, Kaufman creates different kinds
of explosions -- <em>IN YOUR MIND!</em> -- merging the existential
despair of Beckett, the absurdist humor of Monty Python, and the
intellectual playfulness of a natural-born puzzle geek. (Kaufman is
particularly fond of Epimenides' Paradox, a classic one-sentence
brainbuster: "This sentence is false.") In <em>Malkovich</em>, the eponymous actor enters a portal into his own mind. In <em>Adaptation</em>, a screenwriter named Charlie Kaufman writes himself into his own movie, which becomes <em>Adaptation</em>. And the lead character of <em>Eternal Sunshine</em>
witnesses his memories as they are being erased, including the memory
of his decision to erase his memories. Cognitive scientist Douglas
Hofstadter, in his Pulitzer-winning tome <em>Godel, Escher, Bach</em>,
refers to such regressions as "strange loops" -- circular paradoxes that
contain themselves. And Kaufman's Moebius scripts [clever!] contain
some of the strangest loops ever put to film. "I've been told that my
stuff is mathematical," says Kaufman. "There's like a hidden epiphany
in it for me. You think you understand something, and then another
version opens up." [<span style="color: blue;">Great stuff</span> ]</p>
	
 <p>For anyone who doesn't mind a little grey matter with their Raisinets [<span style="color: blue;">nice</span>], Kaufman is more than a writer; he is a<span class="msoIns"><ins cite="mailto:AMG%20Adavance%20Magazine%20Group" datetime="2008-09-04T09:11"> cultural touchstone. </ins></span><span class="msoDel"><del>&nbsp;</del></span><u><span class="msoDel"><del>brainiac-god</del></span></u><span class="msoDel"><del>. [</del></span><span style="color: blue;"><span class="msoDel"><del>Hmmm...maybe a little overstated</del></span></span><span class="msoDel"><del>.]&nbsp; </del></span>"<span class="msoIns"><ins cite="mailto:AMG%20Adavance%20Magazine%20Group" datetime="2008-09-04T09:32">Screenwriters are not</ins></span><span class="msoIns"><ins cite="mailto:AMG%20Adavance%20Magazine%20Group" datetime="2008-09-04T09:36">oriously badly treated, but he's one of the few that has a reputation just for his voice as a writer</ins></span><span class="msoIns"><ins cite="mailto:AMG%20Adavance%20Magazine%20Group" datetime="2008-09-04T09:32">," says Patrick Goldstein, TK. "</ins></span><span class="msoIns"><ins cite="mailto:AMG%20Adavance%20Magazine%20Group" datetime="2008-09-04T09:39">Filmmakers
are eager to see his scripts, and actors are eager to play the parts he
writes." [THIS BETTER? I ALSO HAVE A QUOTE FROM A GUY WHO JUST WROTE A
BOOK ON KAUFMAN, JUST ABOUT HOW GREAT HE IS.</ins></span><span class="msoIns"><ins cite="mailto:AMG%20Adavance%20Magazine%20Group" datetime="2008-09-04T09:40"> OR MAYBE WE DON</ins></span><span class="msoIns"><ins cite="mailto:AMG%20Adavance%20Magazine%20Group" datetime="2008-09-04T09:41">'T NEED A QUOTE HERE AT ALL.</ins></span><span class="msoIns"><ins cite="mailto:AMG%20Adavance%20Magazine%20Group" datetime="2008-09-04T09:39">]</ins></span></p>
	
 <p><span class="msoIns"><ins cite="mailto:AMG%20Adavance%20Magazine%20Group" datetime="2008-09-04T09:12">&nbsp;</ins></span><span class="msoDel"><del>Once,
everybody who was in screenwriting wanted to be Quentin Tarantino,"
says Mick Spadaro, who runs beingcharliekaufman.com, a fan site. "Now,
everybody wants to be Charlie Kaufman." [</del></span><span style="color: blue;"><span class="msoDel"><del>I'm not crazy about this source -- not really surprising that the guy from the charliekaufman.com fansite is saying this</del></span></span><span class="msoDel"><del>.]</del></span><span class="msoDel"><del></del></span></p>
	
 <p>"It's
hard not to see his influence," says Anthony Bregman, who has served as
producer on three of Kaufman's films. "Every submission I get is, 'We
have a Charlie Kaufmanesque movie for you.'" </p>
	
 <p>But it's hard to imagine anyone trying to keep up with <em>Synecdoche</em>, Kaufman's most Kaufmanesque film yet. (Yes, that's a tautology.) Let <em>Stranger Than Fiction</em> and <em>Tropic Thunder</em> splash around the ontological kiddie-pool; <em>Synecdoche</em> plunges to such murky depths that it makes <em>Adaptation</em> look like <em>Mamma Mia!</em>
The film revolves around theater director Caden Cotard, played by
Philip Seymour Hoffman, who attempts to capture the "brutal truth" of
his own existence by staging a life-sized, real-time recreation of it.
He casts an actor to play him, who then must cast an actor to play <em>him</em>, and so on <em>ad infinitum</em>. Caden's girlfriend attracts the affections of the actor playing Caden, and Caden sleeps with the actress playing <em>her</em>.
The entire story, meanwhile, is filtered through Caden's perspective --
further complicating matters, because his autonomic nervous system may
be shutting down, and there are hints that he suffers from psychosis,
chromosomal damage, and Capgras syndrome. Meanwhile, Kaufman himself
hovers around the outer rim of this infinite spiral, a director who --
like Caden -- is attempting to recreate the story of <em>his</em> life, only to get muddled and lost along the way. </p>
	
 <p>If that description makes you yearn for a Kaufman decoder ring<span class="msoDel"><del> [</del></span><span style="color: blue;"><span class="msoDel"><del>nice, because yes, it does</del></span></span><span class="msoDel"><del>]</del></span>, keep wishing; this time, the puzzle master doesn't provide any answers. "<em>Adaptation </em>or <em>Eternal Sunshine</em> ultimately have a safety valve -- a clever conceit that you come to understand," Kaufman says<span class="msoIns"><ins cite="mailto:AMG%20Adavance%20Magazine%20Group" datetime="2008-09-04T09:51"> from his perch in the French restaurant. [WOULD LOVE TO BE MORE COLORFUL, BUT HONESTLY HOW MUCH MORE IS THERE TO SAY?] </ins></span><span class="msoDel"><del> [</del></span><span style="color: blue;"><span class="msoDel"><del>Feels like we've lost our scenery here. Where are we?].</del></span></span><span class="msoDel"><del>&nbsp;</del></span>"There
isn't anything like that in this movie, which is more like life. Things
flying off and becoming unhinged and being incomprehensible seem to be
the process of existence. That's what I set out to explore. I don't
know. Maybe it isn't a good idea for a movie."</p>
	
 <p>Early indications suggest that Kaufman may be right.&nbsp; <em>Synecdoche </em>was one of the most <span class="msoIns"><ins cite="mailto:AMG%20Adavance%20Magazine%20Group" datetime="2008-09-04T09:52">highly </ins></span><u><span class="msoDel"><del>hotly </del></span>anticipated</u> <span class="msoIns"><ins cite="mailto:AMG%20Adavance%20Magazine%20Group" datetime="2008-09-04T09:52">[better?] </ins></span><span class="msoDel"><del>[</del></span><span style="color: blue;"><span class="msoDel"><del>cliché alert</del></span></span><span class="msoDel"><del>] </del></span>films
to screen at Cannes in June, but it left the festival without a
distributor. (To be fair, no other American film got picked up at
Cannes either. <span style="color: blue;">True, but the buzz around this film was big and this is Kaufman we're talking about here</span>.<span class="msoIns"><ins cite="mailto:AMG%20Adavance%20Magazine%20Group" datetime="2008-09-04T09:52"> [YES, ABSOLUTELY, BUT I STILL THINK WE NEED THE PARENTHETICAL DISCLAIMER. BUZZ AROUND CHE WAS BIG TOO...</ins></span>) And while the movie has received its share of raves -- <em>Time</em> called it "a miracle movie" -- most reviews have focused instead on its difficulty; <em>Variety</em>'s
mostly warm analysis warned that "a venturesome distrib will have its
work cut out for it," adding that the film spins "into realms that can
most charitably be described as ambiguous and more derisively as
obscurantist and incomprehensible."&nbsp; (<em>Synecdoche</em> was <span style="color: blue;">quietly</span> picked up, two months after Cannes, by Sony Classics<span class="msoDel"><del>. It hits theaters in late October</del></span>.)</p>
	
 <p><span class="msoIns"><ins cite="mailto:AMG%20Adavance%20Magazine%20Group" datetime="2008-09-04T09:54">It will be two more months before the film's release, and on this August afternoon Kaufman waits, anxiously, </ins></span><span class="msoDel"><del>For now, on this August afternoon, </del></span><span class="msoDel"><del>there is nothing for </del></span><span class="msoDel"><del>Kaufman </del></span><span class="msoDel"><del>to do but </del></span><span class="msoDel"><del>wait, anxiously, </del></span>for the market to render its cold verdict [<span style="color: blue;">Sort of. I mean, he's out there, shilling his movie, going to film fests months before its out</span>.<span class="msoIns"><ins cite="mailto:AMG%20Adavance%20Magazine%20Group" datetime="2008-09-04T09:54"> DOES THIS FIX MATTERS?</ins></span>] He has been here before. When he submitted the screenplay for <em>Adaptation</em>,
he says, he assumed he was destroying his career. "Charlie's nature is
to set himself up in ways that he can't possibly succeed," says Spike
Jonze, who directed <em>Adaptation</em> and <em>Malkovich</em>, "to set up goals that are impossible to pull off." </p>
	
 <p><del>That's not a fun job description, but</del>
Kaufman doesn't see that he has any other choice. "I'm not going to
pander," Kaufman says. "I'm going to anti-pander. But then the question
I raise about myself is, Is that pandering?" Pause. "You can't win."</p>
	
 <p>[BREAK]</p>
	
 <p>Here's
another paradox, albeit one not quite worthy of a Kaufman film: Charlie
Kaufman, perhaps the world's most famous writer of movies, hates almost
all movies. I HAVE SEEN HIM QUOTED SEVERAL PLACES ON THE PERNICIOUSNESS
OF MAINSTREAM HOLLYWOOD STORYTELLING. I PARTICULARLY NEED HIM TO TALK
ABOUT HOW STORIES DON'T ALWAYS END HAPPILY OR EASILY, WHICH WILL TIE
INTO THE END OF THIS STORY. SHOULD BE EASY TO GET THIS OUT OF HIM IN
TORONTO. I HOPE TO ALSO GET A COUPLE OF OTHER SCENES OUT OF TORONTO TO
WORK INTO THIS GRAF AND INSERT BELOW, WHERE I'VE PUT ASTERISKS.</p>
	
 <p>It
may seem surprising, then, that Kaufman began his path to screenwriting
stardom as a scribe for that most constrained and artificial of
formats, the half-hour sitcom. It is probably less surprising that
Kaufman was not very successful at it. (How do you know when you're
toiling in obscurity? When Chris Elliott's cult series <em>Get a Life</em> is the best-known show on your resume.) Throughout the early 90s, Kaufman worked on such forgotten gems as <em>Ned and Stacey</em>, <em>Misery Loves Company</em>, <em>The Dana Carvey Show</em>, and a sketch-comedy show called <em>The Edge</em>. He developed a pilot for Disney called <em>Astronuts</em>
(their title), which Kaufman remembers as "a throwback to the Monkees
about a goofy rock band that were astronauts by day and their biggest
challenge was getting back from space in time so they could make their
gig." </p>
	
 <p>More than once, Kaufman wrote scripts that so
incensed the networks that they opted to "go dark" --&nbsp; not broadcast the
show that week -- rather than air them.[Oh I so want to read those!]
Kaufman penned an episode for the short-lived Bronson Pinchot vehicle <em>The Trouble With Larry</em>,
in which the title character mistakes his archaeologist-roommate's rare
child-king mummy for a piñata, and then has to replace it with an
injured tightrope-walking monkey in a full-body cast. "They wouldn't do
it," Kaufman remembers. "There was a woman on staff who was an
animal-rights person, and she was crying. I was like, 'Man, this is the
stupidest thing. It makes no sense any way you look at it. The monkey's
in a human hospital. A mummy doesn't look like a piñata. Why can't you
make a fake mummy instead of stealing the monkey?' That's what was
funny to me about it. It was like saying 'This form is such bullshit,
let's play around with it.'"</p>
	
 <p>In between short-lived gigs,
Kaufman worked on a similarly bizarre screenplay about a hapless
puppeteer who discovers a portal into the consciousness of actor John
Malkovich. The script was audacious and silly, and Kaufman, who wrote
it to attract more television work, never expected it to be made. But
in YEARTK he got a call from Spike Jonze, a popular music-video
director seeking his first foray into feature films. "It was unlike
anything I had ever read," Jonze says. "Later, Charlie told me that the
script had gotten around and everyone said it was unmakeable. I guess I
didn't know any better."</p>
	
 <p>Kaufman was unfamiliar with Jonze --
whom he assumed was the son of 1940s novelty musician Spike Jones -- but
the two quickly bonded. Jonze invited Kaufman, who lived in New York at
the time, to his Los Angeles home, where the two spent four days going
over every line of the screenplay. Jonze had issues with the movie's
third act: Kaufman's draft spun off into chaos, with the main character
engaging in a puppeteering duel with the devil, who enters Malkovich's
body and rules earth like a tyrant. Together, the two hammered out a
new ending that felt less madcap and more emotionally resonant. </p>
	
 <p>That
provided a template for Kaufman, who has been deeply involved with the
making of almost all of his films, a rarity for a screenwriter. In his
subsequent movies -- <em>Human Nature</em>, <em>Adaptation</em>, and <em>Eternal Sunshine</em>
-- Kaufman submitted drafts to the directors, then worked hand-in-hand
with them as they revised and polished the script together. (The one
exception: <em>Confessions of a Dangerous Mind</em>, an impressionistic biopic about <em>Gong Show </em>creator
Chuck Barriss. Kaufman says that George Clooney, who directed the film,
never consulted him, and he still holds a grudge. "My value to a
director is to keep them aware of what the movie's really <em>about</em>," Kaufman says. "He wasn't interested in that.") <span style="color: blue;">Gondry somewhere in this section, maybe?<span class="msoIns"><ins cite="mailto:AMG%20Adavance%20Magazine%20Group" datetime="2008-09-04T09:55"> [ASSUMING I CAN GET HIM, YES]</ins></span></span></p>
	
 <p>Jonze was initially slated to direct <em>Synecdoche</em> as well. The idea for the film came from Amy Pascal, Sony's TITLE TK. While traveling with Kaufman and Jonze to promote <em>Adaptation</em>,
she suggested that the two work on a horror movie. Jonze had recently
suffered anxiety dreams, and he and Kaufman agreed they would rather
capture the eerie quality of those night terrors than recreate standard
slasher-flick tropes. The two hashed out some basic details -- a man
dying of an unidentifiable disease -- and Kaufman left to write.</p>
	
 <p>He emerged two years later with <em>Synecodoche</em>,
a sprawling opus that spans TK decades of regret and death. By that
time, Jonze was already committed to directing an adaptation of Maurice
Sendak's <em>Where the Wild Things Are</em>. Kaufman, who majored in filmmaking at New York University, always planned to direct. He asked Jonze if he could take over <em>Synecdoche</em>, and Jonze quickly agreed<span style="color: blue;">. Quote here from Kaufman about why he wanted to direct?<span class="msoIns"><ins cite="mailto:AMG%20Adavance%20Magazine%20Group" datetime="2008-09-04T09:56"> [WILL GET FROM HIM IN TORONTO]</ins></span></span></p>
	
 <p>With
Kaufman at the helm, there was no need to engage in multi-day
script-polishing sessions, no requirement to adapt his work to another
director's vision. This time, Kaufman was free to make the movie as he
saw fit. Other than some cutting for length, there was virtually no
difference between Kaufman's first draft and the shooting script. </p>
	
 <p>But
if this was a thrilling prospect for Kaufman, it was less so for Sony;
after reading the script and learning that Jonze would not direct it,
they abandoned the project, requiring Kaufman to drum up financing from
other sources. (He eventually got $20 million from Sidney Kimmel
Entertainment.) Meanwhile, Kaufman found himself growing defensive over
some of his artistic choices. He says that he and Jonze had some
difficult conversations after screenings, when Jonze would suggest
directions with which Kaufman disagreed. "There were tensions," Kaufman
says. "But Spike loves the movie now. He has told me that it isn't the
movie he would make, but it shouldn't be. It's the movie that I made."</p>

<p>*** INSERT ANOTHER SCENE FROM TORONTO HERE.</p>
	
 <p>Jonze says that, for him, the story of <em>Synecdoche</em>
ends at the screening at Cannes. "I'd already seen this movie so many
times in editing, but at that screening, somehow I still felt it very
deeply," he says. "And the movie was over, and the credits were
rolling, and I was still sitting in that space that the movie created.
And then the lights came up, and suddenly I'm seeing thousands of other
faces in that same space. And they gave Charlie a standing ovation, and
it had such <em>feeling </em>to it. That felt like the end of it. Now
we have to release it, and there's all this other stuff, but that felt
like the ending." </p>
	
 <p>[BREAK]</p>
	
 <p>Well, that's one
ending. It's a pretty familiar one to any movie buff: the dedicated
individual who believes in himself, takes on every risk, and triumphs.
That's been Kaufman's story so far -- it's the story of <em>Being John Malkovich</em>, the story of <em>Adaptation</em>, the story of <em>Eternal Sunshine</em>. It wraps everything up in a nice bow and lets us all feel good about ourselves. Maybe this ends the same way, with <em>Synecdoche</em> finding a dedicated following and earning its place in cinematic history, even if it never does <em>Dark Knight</em> numbers. </p>
	
 <p>But
maybe there is another way to end to this story. Maybe it doesn't end
with Kaufman's moment of triumph in Cannes. Maybe after Cannes, <em>Synecdoche</em>
sees a limited release. Maybe audiences don't love it. Maybe Kaufman
doesn't emerge victorious. Maybe he spends five years pursuing the
truest expression of his artistic vision, only to find it
misunderstood, or underappreciated, or -- worst of all -- ignored. Maybe
this is a story of frustration and disappointment and failure. It may
not be a happy ending. It may not be the kind of ending that would make
for a good Hollywood movie. But it is the kind of ending, for better or
worse, that Charlie Kaufman would write.&nbsp; <span style="color: blue;"><span class="msoDel"><br /></span></span></p><p><span style="color: blue;">__________________________________________</span></p><p><span style="color: blue;"><span class="msoDel"><br /></span></span></p><p><b><em>FF.Kaufman 01 Full</em></b></p>

<p>UNADAPTED</p>
	
 <p>Charlie Kaufman's ability to bend moviegoers' minds has made him one of cinema's most respected <em>auteurs</em>. But with his directorial debut, has Hollywood's brainiest screenwriter gotten too smart for his own good?</p>
	
 <p>By Jason Tanz</p>
	
 <p>There are TK sentences in this story. One of them is false.</p>
	
 <p>[Break]</p>
	
 <p>We
open on Charlie Kaufman, entering an empty room in a French bistro in
Los Angeles. He looks nothing like Nicolas Cage, who played&nbsp; Kaufman in
the Kaufman-penned film <em>Adaptation</em>. Cage is hulkish and
balding. Kaufman is slight, with a healthy serving of reddish brown
curls. Two deep vertical creases climb from the bridge of his nose, the
product, one imagines, of countless late-night brow-furrowing sessions.
His wardrobe whispers "hipster-shlub": short-sleeve Penguin
button-down, tan jeans, lime-green socks. Kaufman, 50[CK], has a
reputation for shyness, but, as he takes a seat in the far corner of
the restaurant, he speaks directly, rapidly, forcefully.</p>
	
 <p>Kaufman is here to talk up his directorial debut, <em>Synecdoche, New York</em>.
The film, out in late October, is the Oscar-winning screenwriter's
trickiest to date -- which is really saying something. Kaufman's
previous mind-bending work -- a roster that includes <em>Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind</em>, <em>Adaptation</em>, and <em>Being John Malkovich</em> -- brought meta to the multiplex and established him as the most distinctive and admired screenwriter of his generation. With <em>Synecdoche</em>, Kaufman is attempting to make the jump to full-on <em>auteur</em>
status. It's been five years since he started batting ideas around with
his friend and sometime collaborator Spike Jonze, five long years
during which he worked on nothing but this bleak story of a man's
anxieties, failures, flaws and ultimate demise. It's a deeply personal,
borderline-obsessive story of heartache and death -- and not the fun
kind of death that fills movie theaters, but the
holy-crap-look-at-the-size-of-that-abyss kind of death that fills
Smiths albums and Sartre novels<span style="color: blue;">. </span>It is not, in other words, an easy sell. And now he has to plug the thing. </p>
	
 <p>He
is not very good at it. The first question is a softball -- How do you
feel about this film in relation to your other ones? -- and the answer
should be obvious.<span style="color: blue;">:</span> <em>I'm prouder of this movie than any I've ever done. Everyone should see it.</em>
But Kaufman doesn't do confident. "This is a difficult period for me
right now with this movie, because it's over and I want it to be over,"
he says. "Putting it out into the world, there's a lot of..." He trails
off, stares at a point in the middle distance for a few seconds, then
continues. "It's so hard to know what I'm supposed to say. I'm
participating in an article to sell this movie, but what am I supposed
to say? 'It's great and I'm loving it'? It seems to be a tricky thing
to sell people on, and I'm frustrated with that." </p>
	
 <p>The mind
of Charlie Kaufman may not be the happiest place on earth, but it is
one of the most fascinating. At a time when most movies measure success
by the number of cornea-frying fireballs, Kaufman creates different
kinds of explosions -- <em>IN YOUR MIND!</em> -- merging the existential
despair of Beckett, the absurdist humor of Monty Python, and the
intellectual playfulness of a natural-born puzzle geek. (Kaufman is
particularly fond of Epimenides' Paradox, a classic one-sentence
brainbuster: "This sentence is false.") In <em>Malkovich</em>, the eponymous actor enters a portal into his own mind. In <em>Adaptation</em>, a screenwriter named Charlie Kaufman writes himself into his own movie, which becomes <em>Adaptation</em>. And the lead character of <em>Eternal Sunshine</em>
witnesses his memories as they are being erased, including the memory
of his decision to erase his memories. Cognitive scientist Douglas
Hofstadter, in his Pulitzer-winning tome <em>Godel, Escher, Bach</em>,
refers to such regressions as "strange loops" -- circular paradoxes that
contain themselves. And Kaufman's Moebius scripts [clever!] contain
some of the strangest loops ever put to film. "I've been told that my
stuff is mathematical," says Kaufman. "There's like a hidden epiphany
in it for me. You think you understand something, and then another
version opens up." </p>
	
 <p>For anyone who doesn't mind a little
grey matter with their Raisinets, Kaufman is more than a writer; he is
a cultural touchstone. "It's hard not to see his influence," says
Anthony Bregman, who has served as producer on three of Kaufman's
films. "Every submission I get is, 'We have a Charlie Kaufmanesque
movie for you.'" </p>
	
 <p>But it's hard to imagine anyone trying to keep up with <em>Synecdoche</em>, Kaufman's most Kaufmanesque film yet. (Yes, that's a tautology.) Let <em>Stranger Than Fiction</em> and <em>Tropic Thunder</em> splash around the ontological kiddie-pool; <em>Synecdoche</em> plunges to such murky depths that it makes <em>Adaptation</em> look like <em>Mamma Mia!</em>
The film revolves around theater director Caden Cotard (played by
Philip Seymour Hoffman), who attempts to capture the "brutal truth" of
his own existence by staging a life-sized, real-time recreation of it.
He casts an actor to play him, who then must cast an actor to play <em>him</em>, and so on <em>ad infinitum</em>. Caden's girlfriend attracts the affections of the actor playing Caden, and Caden sleeps with the actress playing <em>her</em>.
The entire story, meanwhile, is filtered through Caden's perspective --
further complicating matters, because his autonomic nervous system may
be shutting down, and there are hints that he suffers from psychosis,
chromosomal damage, and Capgras syndrome. <span style="color: black;">(Caden's last name, Cotard, is also the name of a delusion that causes sufferers to believe that they are dead or dying.) </span>Meanwhile,
Kaufman himself hovers around the outer rim of this infinite spiral, a
director who -- like Caden -- is attempting to recreate the story of <em>his</em> life, only to get muddled and lost along the way. </p>
	
 <p>If
this all makes you yearn for a Kaufman decoder ring, keep wishing; this
time, the puzzle master doesn't provide any answers. "<em>Adaptation </em>or <em>Eternal Sunshine</em>
ultimately have a safety valve -- a clever conceit that you come to
understand," Kaufman says."There isn't anything like that in this
movie, which is more like life. Things flying off and becoming unhinged
and being incomprehensible seem to be the process of existence. That's
what I set out to explore. I don't know. Maybe it isn't a good idea for
a movie."</p>
	
 <p>Early indications suggest that Kaufman may be right.&nbsp; <em>Synecdoche </em>was
one of the most highly anticipated films to screen at Cannes in June,
but it left the festival without a distributor. (To be fair, no other
American film, including Steven Soderbergh's equally hyped Che Guevara
biopic landed a deal at Cannes either.) And while the movie has
received its share of raves -- <em>Time</em> called it "a miracle movie" -- most reviews have focused instead on its difficulty; <em>Variety</em>'s
mostly warm analysis warned that "a venturesome distrib will have its
work cut out for it," adding that the film spins "into realms that can
most charitably be described as ambiguous and more derisively as
obscurantist and incomprehensible."&nbsp; (Two months after Cannes, Sony
Classics quietly picked up <em>Synecdoche</em> for TK million, with plans to release in a modest TK number theaters.)</p>
	
 <p>It
will be two more months before the film comes out, and on this August
afternoon Kaufman waits, anxiously, for the market to render its cold
verdict. He has been here before. When he submitted the screenplay for <em>Adaptation</em>,
he says, he assumed he was destroying his career. "Charlie's nature is
to set himself up in ways that he can't possibly succeed," says Spike
Jonze, who directed <em>Adaptation</em> and <em>Malkovich</em>, "to set up goals that are impossible to pull off." </p>
	
 <p>Kaufman
doesn't see that he has any other choice. "I'm not going to pander,"
Kaufman says. "I'm going to anti-pander. But then the question I raise
about myself is<em>, Is that pandering</em>?" Pause. "You can't win."</p>
	
 <p>[BREAK]</p>
	
 <p><span style="color: black;">Charlie
Kaufman is running through a courtyard and into the bathroom of a
restaurant in Toronto, his hands to his face, bleeding from the bridge
of his nose. It's early September, the TKth night of the Toronto Film
Festival and in two days, </span><span style="color: black;"><em>Synecdoch</em></span><span style="color: black;">e
will make it's North American premiere. Tonight, Sony Pictures Classics
is throwing a party to promote the ten films they have at the festival
and, with any luck, generate early Oscar buzz. In one corner, director
Jonathan Demme chats up a few industry bigwigs as a luminous Anne
Hathaway dazzles a few lanyard-toting reporters. Kaufman should be
right here, eating canapés and shilling </span><span style="color: black;"><em>Synecdoche</em></span><span style="color: black;">,
but he bumped his head getting out of his taxi and his glasses sliced
into his face, and now he's in panicking that he's broken his nose.
Instead of schmoozing, Kaufman spends the cocktail hour in a darkened
corner of the restaurant, talking to actress Debra Winger about her
farm in the Catskills and holding a napkin full of ice cubes to his
face. </span></p>
	
 <p><span style="color: black;">"I shouldn't have come here tonight," he mutters. "Then my nose would be fine." </span></p>
	
 <p><span style="color: black;">Even now, Hollywood's most admired screenwriter can't manage to celebrate. And </span>here's
another paradox, albeit one not quite worthy of a Kaufman film: Charlie
Kaufman, perhaps the world's most famous writer of movies, hates almost
all movies<span style="color: black;"> He is miserable about the state of the movie industry, and hates much of what Hollywood produces in the name of art</span>. "TK quote from Kaufman Tk" </p>
	
 <p>It
may seem surprising, then, that Kaufman began his path to screenwriting
stardom as a scribe for that most constrained and artificial of
formats, the half-hour sitcom. It is probably less surprising that
Kaufman was not very successful at it. (How do you know when you're
toiling in obscurity? When Chris Elliott's cult series <em>Get a Life</em> is the best-known show on your resume.) Throughout the early 90s, Kaufman worked on such forgotten gems as <em>Ned and Stacey</em>, <em>Misery Loves Company</em>, <em>The Dana Carvey Show</em>, and a sketch-comedy show called <em>The Edge</em>. He developed a pilot for Disney called <em>Astronuts</em>
(their title), which Kaufman remembers as "a throwback to the Monkees
about a goofy rock band that were astronauts by day and their biggest
challenge was getting back from space in time so they could make their
gig." </p>
	
 <p>More than once, Kaufman wrote scripts that so
incensed the networks that they opted to "go dark" --&nbsp; not broadcast the
show that week -- rather than air them. Kaufman penned an episode for
the short-lived Bronson Pinchot vehicle <em>The Trouble With Larry</em>,
in which the title character mistakes his archaeologist-roommate's rare
child-king mummy for a piñata, and then has to replace it with an
injured tightrope-walking monkey in a full-body cast. "They wouldn't do
it," Kaufman remembers. "There was a woman on staff who was an
animal-rights person, and she was crying. I was like, 'Man, this is the
stupidest thing. It makes no sense any way you look at it. The monkey's
in a human hospital. A mummy doesn't look like a piñata. Why can't you
make a fake mummy instead of stealing the monkey?' That's what was
funny to me about it. It was like saying 'This form is such bullshit,
let's play around with it.'"</p>
	
 <p>In between short-lived gigs,
Kaufman worked on a similarly bizarre screenplay about a hapless
puppeteer who discovers a portal into the consciousness of actor John
Malkovich. The script was audacious and silly, and Kaufman, who wrote
it to attract more television work, never expected it to be made. But
in YEARTK he got a call from Spike Jonze, a popular music-video
director seeking his first foray into feature films. "It was unlike
anything I had ever read," Jonze says. "Later, Charlie told me that the
script had gotten around and everyone said it was unmakeable. I guess I
didn't know any better."</p>
	
 <p>Kaufman was unfamiliar with Jonze --
whom he assumed was the son of 1940s novelty musician Spike Jones -- but
the two quickly bonded. Jonze invited Kaufman, who lived in New York at
the time, to his Los Angeles home, where the two spent four days going
over every line of the screenplay. Jonze had issues with the movie's
third act: Kaufman's draft spun off into chaos, with the main character
engaging in a puppeteering duel with the devil, who enters Malkovich's
body and rules earth like a tyrant. Together, the two hammered out a
new ending that felt less madcap and more emotionally resonant. </p>
	
 <p>That
provided a template for Kaufman, who has been deeply involved with the
making of almost all of his films, a rarity for a screenwriter. In his
subsequent movies -- <em>Human Nature</em>, <em>Adaptation</em>, and <em>Eternal Sunshine</em>
-- Kaufman submitted drafts to the directors, then worked hand-in-hand
with them as they revised and polished the script together. (The one
exception: <em>Confessions of a Dangerous Mind</em>, an impressionistic biopic about <em>Gong Show </em>creator
Chuck Barriss. Kaufman says that George Clooney, who directed the film,
never consulted him, and he still holds a grudge. "My value to a
director is to keep them aware of what the movie's really <em>about</em>," Kaufman says. "He wasn't interested in that.") </p>
	
 <p>Jonze was initially slated to direct <em>Synecdoche</em>
as well. The idea for the film came from Amy Pascal, co-chair at Sony
Pictures. While traveling with Kaufman and Jonze to promote <em>Adaptation</em>,
she suggested that the two work on a horror movie. Jonze had recently
suffered anxiety dreams, and he and Kaufman agreed they would rather
capture the eerie quality of those night terrors than recreate standard
slasher-flick tropes. The two hashed out some basic details -- a man
dying of an unidentifiable disease -- and Kaufman left to write.</p>
	
 <p>He emerged two years later with <em>Synecodoche</em>,
a sprawling opus that spans TK decades of regret and death. By that
time, Jonze was already committed to directing an adaptation of Maurice
Sendak's <em>Where the Wild Things Are</em>. Kaufman, who majored in filmmaking at New York University, always planned to direct. He asked Jonze if he could take over <em>Synecdoche</em>, and Jonze quickly agreed<span style="color: blue;">. Quote here from Kaufman about why he wanted to direct TK from Toronto. </span></p>
	
 <p>With
Kaufman at the helm, there was no need to engage in multi-day
script-polishing sessions, no requirement to adapt his work to another
director's vision. This time, Kaufman was free to make the movie as he
saw fit. Other than some cutting for length, there was virtually no
difference between Kaufman's first draft and the shooting script. </p>
	
 <p>But
if this was a thrilling prospect for Kaufman, it was less so for Sony;
after reading the script and learning that Jonze would not direct it,
they abandoned the project, requiring Kaufman to drum up financing from
other sources. (He eventually got $20 million from Sidney Kimmel
Entertainment.) Meanwhile, Kaufman found himself growing defensive over
some of his artistic choices. He says that he and Jonze had some
difficult conversations after screenings, when Jonze would suggest
directions with which Kaufman disagreed. "There were tensions," Kaufman
says. "But Spike loves the movie now. He has told me that it isn't the
movie he would make, but it shouldn't be. It's the movie that I made."</p>
	
 <p>Jonze says that, for him, the story of <em>Synecdoche</em>
ends at the screening at Cannes. "I'd already seen this movie so many
times in editing, but at that screening, somehow I still felt it very
deeply," he says. "And the movie was over, and the credits were
rolling, and I was still sitting in that space that the movie created.
And then the lights came up, and suddenly I'm seeing thousands of other
faces in that same space. And they gave Charlie a standing ovation, and
it had such <em>feeling </em>to it. That felt like the end of it. Now
we have to release it, and there's all this other stuff, but that felt
like the ending." </p>
	
 <p>[BREAK]</p>
	
 <p>Well, that's one
ending. It's a pretty familiar one to any movie buff: the dedicated
individual who believes in himself, takes on every risk, and triumphs.
That's been Kaufman's story so far -- it's the story of <em>Being John Malkovich</em>, the story of <em>Adaptation</em>, the story of <em>Eternal Sunshine</em>. It wraps everything up in a nice bow and lets us all feel good about ourselves. Maybe this ends the same way, with <em>Synecdoche</em> finding a dedicated following and earning its place in cinematic history, even if it never does <em>Dark Knight</em> numbers. </p>
	
 <p>But
maybe there is another way to end to this story. Maybe it doesn't end
with Kaufman's moment of triumph in Cannes. Maybe after Cannes, <em>Synecdoche</em>
sees a limited release. Maybe audiences don't love it. Maybe Kaufman
doesn't emerge victorious. Maybe he spends five years pursuing the
truest expression of his artistic vision, only to find it
misunderstood, or underappreciated, or -- worst of all -- ignored. Maybe
this is a story of frustration and disappointment and failure. It may
not be a happy ending. It may not be the kind of ending that would make
for a good Hollywood movie. But it is the kind of ending, for better or
worse, that Charlie Kaufman would write. </p>]]>
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    <title>Part 13: Photo Issues II</title>
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    <published>2008-09-12T06:41:25Z</published>
    <updated>2008-09-12T06:42:50Z</updated>

    <summary><![CDATA[From deputy photo editor Anna Alexander:I'm the photo editor on this experiment. I guess I'll fill you in on the juice of what happens next with the photo shoot attempts.&nbsp; First, I get the contact info for the subject from...]]></summary>
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        <![CDATA[<p>From deputy photo editor Anna Alexander:</p><blockquote><p>I'm the photo editor on this experiment. I guess I'll fill you in on
the juice of what happens next with the photo shoot attempts.&nbsp; First, I
get the contact info for the subject from the editor.&nbsp; She gets it from
the writer, and busts it back to me. My contact was Sony's
publicist--he has requested I not reveal his name, so we'll call him The
Publicist.</p><p>Contacting the subject for a photo shoot usually takes place
somewhere between a green-lit pitch and the rough.&nbsp; I'm a bit late on
my post, so it's not quite chronological. There's a reason I have a
degree in photography, not literature.</p><p>I usually don't call contacts first if email is provided. If I don't
hear back for a bit, I attack by phone.&nbsp; When I first wrote him, I
mentioned that I was aware of Kaufman's "no photo shoot" stance, so I
inquired about the possibility of doing a self-portrait.</p><p>Meanwhile, Scott remembered one of our senior editors, Adam Rogers,
spending some time with the director Spike Jonze at a past Wired
event.&nbsp; Spike Jonze and Charlie Kaufman worked together on <em>Being John Malkovich</em>, and Jonze was a photographer in his early days. </p><p>I'm not going to post any emails between The Publicist and I, but I
will post my updates to Scott, Nancy, and Jason regarding any info on
shooting Charlie.</p></blockquote> ]]>
        <![CDATA[<div class="entry-more"><p><strong>8/19/08</strong></p>

<blockquote><p><b><em>On 8/19/08 4:44 PM, "Anna Alexander" Anna_Alexander@wired.com&gt; wrote:</em></b><br />So,
I'm on the kaufman story and somebody (I'm not naming names) said that
Charlie's friends with Spike Jonze and that you have good contact with
spike jonze, so you might be able to help us secure a photo shoot with
him. OR if Spike Jonze wants to take a photo of him?</p><p>anna</p></blockquote>



<blockquote><p><b><em>On 8/19/08 4:45 PM, "Rogers, Adam" &lt;Adam_Rogers@wired.com&gt; wrote:</em></b><br />I
gave Spike a tour of NextFest in LA last year, and his producer might
perhaps remember me. We had a good time. I could send an email
reintroducing myself and asking if they'd be willing to talk to you
about it?</p><p>Adam</p></blockquote>



<blockquote><p><b><em>On 8/19/08 4:47 PM, "Anna Alexander" Anna_Alexander@wired.com&gt; wrote:</em></b><br />Thank you kindly.&nbsp; </p></blockquote>

<blockquote><p><b><em>On 8/19/08 4:48 PM, "Rogers, Adam" &lt;Adam_Rogers@wired.com&gt; wrote:</em></b><br />No promises, but I'll ping them....</p><p>Adam</p></blockquote>



<blockquote><p><b><em>On 8/19/08 5:30 PM, "Rogers, Adam" &lt;Adam_Rogers@wired.com&gt; wrote:</em></b><br />Contact there says she'll let me know by the end of the week....</p><p>Adam</p></blockquote>

<br /><p><strong>8/20/08</strong></p>

<blockquote><p><em>from&nbsp; &nbsp; Anna Alexander &lt;Anna_Alexander@wired.com&gt;<br />to&nbsp; &nbsp; Scott Dadich &lt;scott@wired.com&gt;, Nancy Miller &lt;Nancy_Miller@wiredmag.com&gt;,<br />Jason Tanz &lt;jason_tanz@wired.com&gt;</em><br /><em>date&nbsp; &nbsp; Thu, Aug 20, 2008 at 10:18 AM<br />
subject&nbsp; &nbsp; Kaufman photo</em><br /><em>&nbsp;</em><br />The publicist has not gotten back to me about his possible self-portrait, but I expect sometime today I should hear from him.</p><p>Adam contacted Spike Jonze's people regarding a possible<br />Shoot
with Jonze as the photographer (whoo!), which would make Kaufman feel
much more comfortable.&nbsp; He was told he would hear back before the
weekend. I'll keep y'all updated as I know things.</p><p> -anna</p></blockquote>





<blockquote><p><b><em>On 8/20/08 10:19 AM, "Jason Tanz" &lt;Jason_Tanz@wired.com&gt; wrote:</em></b><br />Really cool. Great idea about Spike.</p></blockquote>

<blockquote><p><b><em>On Aug 20, 2008, at 10:37 AM, "Nancy Miller" &lt;Nancy_Miller@wiredmag.com wrote:</em></b><br />Yeah!</p></blockquote><br /><p><strong>8/21/08</strong></p>

<blockquote><p><em>from&nbsp; &nbsp; Anna Alexander &lt;Anna_Alexander@wired.com&gt;<br />to&nbsp; &nbsp; Jason Tanz &lt;Jason_Tanz@wired.com&gt;, Nancy Miller &lt;Nancy_Miller@wiredmag.com&gt;,<br />Scott Dadich &lt;scott@wired.com&gt;<br />date&nbsp; &nbsp; Thu, Aug 21, 2008 at 11:35 AM<br />subject&nbsp; &nbsp; Kaufman photo</em></p><p>Just letting you know that Adam got back to me and though he had
"all kind words for the magazine," Spike Jonze is incredibly busy doing
post for his next movie.&nbsp; I am supposed to hear from the publicist soon.</p><p>-anna</p></blockquote>





<blockquote><p><em>from Anna Alexander &lt;Anna_Alexander@wired.com&gt;<br />to&nbsp; &nbsp; Jason Tanz &lt;Jason_Tanz@wired.com&gt;, Nancy Miller &lt;Nancy_Miller@wiredmag.com&gt;,<br />Scott Dadich &lt;scott@wired.com&gt;<br />date&nbsp; &nbsp; Thu, Aug 21, 2008 at 11:39 AM<br />subject&nbsp; &nbsp; Kaufman photo, part deux </em>&nbsp; &nbsp;</p><p>Just as I pressed "send" on that email, the publicist got back to me.<br />Kaufman is in Europe until Sunday, he'll let me know if he hears anything on Monday.</p><p>anna</p></blockquote>





<p><strong>8/27/08</strong></p>

<blockquote><p><em>from&nbsp; &nbsp; Anna Alexander &lt;Anna_Alexander@wired.com&gt;<br />to&nbsp; &nbsp; Jason Tanz &lt;Jason_Tanz@wired.com&gt;, Nancy Miller &lt;Nancy_Miller@wiredmag.com&gt;,<br />Scott Dadich &lt;scott@wired.com&gt;<br />date&nbsp; &nbsp; Wed, Aug 27, 2008 at 10:18 AM<br />subject&nbsp; &nbsp; Photo update.</em></p><p>Aw yeah.<br />The publicist says Kaufman "has an idea he is thinking over" - and he'll let him know a bit later this week.<br />He's going to get back to LA and see what he has in the house in order to pull it off.</p><p>authenticity at it's best people!</p><p>-anna</p></blockquote>







<blockquote><p><b><em>On 8/27/08 10:20 AM, "Scott Dadich" scott@wired.com&gt; wrote:</em></b><br />WOOOHOOO!<br />go ANNA!!!!</p></blockquote>

<blockquote><p><b><em>On 8/27/08 10:30 AM, "Jason Tanz" Jason_Tanz@wired.com&gt; wrote:</em></b><br />HELLZ YES. great job. Really exciting.</p></blockquote>

<blockquote><p><b><em>On 8/27/08 10:31 AM, "Nancy Miller" Nancy_Miller@wiredmag.com&gt; wrote:</em></b><br />Really nice, lady. Really nice.</p></blockquote>

<blockquote><p><b><em>On 8/27/08 11:07 AM, "Anna Alexander" Anna_Alexander@wired.com&gt; wrote:</em></b><br />It gets better.</p><p>"He is THINKING of using some japanese doll they had made that looks
like him (from some past film)...where he would shoot this doll in full
frame and then he will hopefully place himself somewhere in the
background of the shot as well..."</p><p>This is, of course, not set in stone...</p></blockquote>





<blockquote><p><b><em>On 8/27/08 11:20 AM, "Scott Dadich" Scott@wired.com&gt; wrote:</em></b><br />OMGEEEEEEE</p></blockquote></div>]]>
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